Anonymous sent: Since most of your essay is in past tense, make sure the whole thing is in past tense~ ^^. Never start a sentence with 'and!' The last sentence can be made into two sentences. 'Everything will going to be easy' should be 'everything is going to be easy.' I hope I somehow helped. e w e;
omg! anon!! thank you so much!! to tell you the truth, past tense is always my problem in grammar >__<
this really helped alot!!! thank you!!!!!!
how did you read my essay without looking on my background? O__o LOL~ dont mind me hahaha!